http://justinpickard.net/2008/01/f3-fatimas-funeral/ « Nostalgia for the Future » Sat, 07 Jan 2012 05:47:05 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://justinpickard.net/2008/01/f3-fatimas-funeral/comment-page-1/#comment-369 » F3: Human Interest Story >>Nostalgia For Infinity: Literature, Gaming, Punk Rock (and all that) Sun, 13 Jan 2008 13:07:10 +0000 http://justinpickard.net/?p=89#comment-369 [...] me busy during the day and leaving me exhausted in the evening. Semper idem. Remember to check out the other flash fictionists, all of whom managed to meet the deadline… I’ll be over [...] [...] me busy during the day and leaving me exhausted in the evening. Semper idem. Remember to check out the other flash fictionists, all of whom managed to meet the deadline… I’ll be over [...]

]]> http://justinpickard.net/2008/01/f3-fatimas-funeral/comment-page-1/#comment-360 GLP Fri, 11 Jan 2008 21:38:59 +0000 http://justinpickard.net/?p=89#comment-360 Really well written. The germ of a story that needs a little polishing to really let it shine. Good stuff. Really well written. The germ of a story that needs a little polishing to really let it shine. Good stuff.

]]> http://justinpickard.net/2008/01/f3-fatimas-funeral/comment-page-1/#comment-358 Justin Fri, 11 Jan 2008 17:22:26 +0000 http://justinpickard.net/?p=89#comment-358 Thanks, Shaun. Think it needs a bit of line editing, but am glad to have finally got it written down. Thanks, Shaun. Think it needs a bit of line editing, but am glad to have finally got it written down.

]]> http://justinpickard.net/2008/01/f3-fatimas-funeral/comment-page-1/#comment-356 ShaunCG Fri, 11 Jan 2008 13:54:20 +0000 http://justinpickard.net/?p=89#comment-356 Really liked this - you painted the scene and the setting so well. I love your fragmented-images approach to introducing characters and places. Really liked this – you painted the scene and the setting so well. I love your fragmented-images approach to introducing characters and places.

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